Change it up: Sentence Structure
D.C. and Avery celebrate some great news as we look at how to revive an excerpt with stilted, repetitive sentence structure. Things get a bit silly as we jazz up some old writing by adding a few, uh, creative flourishes. And a brief digression to discuss monster romance.
- Forging a Nightmare, by Patricia A. Jackson
- Nyx Publishing
- Neon Hemlock Press
- Aveda Vice, author
Drink Recipe: Layered Coffee Shot
- .5oz Caramel Syrup
- .5oz Mr. Black Coffee Liqueur
- .5oz Dark Rum
Carefully layer in a shot glass with a spoon.
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