Episode 039

Change it up: Sentence Structure

D.C. and Avery celebrate some great news as we look at how to revive an excerpt with stilted, repetitive sentence structure. Things get a bit silly as we jazz up some old writing by adding a few, uh, creative flourishes. And a brief digression to discuss monster romance.

Items mentioned:

• Forging a Nightmare, by Patricia A. Jackson
• Nyx Publishing
• Neon Hemlock Press
• Aveda Vice, author

---

Drink Recipe: Layered Coffee Shot

• .5oz Caramel Syrup
• .5oz Mr. Black Coffee Liqueur
• .5oz Dark Rum

Carefully layer in a shot glass with a spoon.

---

(to download, right-click the Download button and choose “Save File As”).

Streaming Audio:

---

Find us online:

• Twitter
• Twitch
• Spotify
• YouTube