Episode 39: Change It Up (Sentence Structure)

D.C. and Avery celebrate some great news as we look at how to revive an excerpt with stilted, repetitive sentence structure. Things get a bit silly as we jazz up some old writing by adding a few, uh, creative flourishes. And a brief digression to discuss monster romance.

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Drink Recipe: Layered Coffee Shot
  • .5oz Caramel Syrup
  • .5oz Mr. Black Coffee Liqueur
  • .5oz Dark Rum

Carefully layer in a shot glass with a spoon.


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